Extremely rare, albino Martians - my favourite alien life forms - how ever did you know? Cameron, your story is so imaginative and action packed. The use of visual language, onomatopoeia and timing really draws the reader in, and it made me feel like a modern day Indiana Jones! Thank you. In real life, I used to live in a similar home to the one you first described - the neighbour's house actually blew up and it destroyed most of the trees in my garden. But that's another story for another day.... This car story is perfect for the moment!
Extremely rare, albino Martians - my favourite alien life forms - how ever did you know? Cameron, your story is so imaginative and action packed. The use of visual language, onomatopoeia and timing really draws the reader in, and it made me feel like a modern day Indiana Jones! Thank you. In real life, I used to live in a similar home to the one you first described - the neighbour's house actually blew up and it destroyed most of the trees in my garden. But that's another story for another day.... This car story is perfect for the moment!
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