Tuesday, September 11, 2018

Repunzel

In our class  our teacher reads us a fairy tale and we make a scratch and expand a sentence of the fairy tail. This is my expanded sentence.

To his horror the fairy was standing there


As the petrified man sticks his round head above the dark
brown fence, it rose out of the ground like a tree in the pitch
black darkness. He stumbled as he brought his head
over the fence. He saw the most horrifying sight that he had
ever seen in his whole entire life. A look of terror spread on
his small face as he shook his head to make sure his eyes
weren’t tricking him. The proof was the slight humming
noise of irritation rising from deep inside the belly of the
beast. He tasted the the damp soggy rags as he stared
into space, He knew it had ended for his poor endanged
soul. Right there standing in front of him with a smirk
spread across her face,
The evil fairy was standing there looking at him…

By Cameron

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