Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Lake Brunner School in Moana, near Greymouth, NZ.
Well done Cameron for choosing a topic you were an expert on. You did well during the editing process to reword some sentences to make it clearer for the reader. I look forward to seeing more writing of yours throughout the year on your blog. Miss J
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Well done Cameron for choosing a topic you were an expert on. You did well during the editing process to reword some sentences to make it clearer for the reader. I look forward to seeing more writing of yours throughout the year on your blog. Miss J
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